Mrs D

There are some really good moments here. I like the structure. You need to get the rest of the filming uploaded asap and get rid of all the gaps. I like the shot of the lights flickering and the one outside at night works well. You need to consider how you will end it and add some music to create atmosphere.

Draft 1

Draft 1 of trailer

Mrs D

Well done for including your audience feedback. I'm concerned about your lack of updates on your blog. Please update asap, get more filming done and a draft up.

Audience Feedback

Cut down text length
Add background music
Add frames that show the haunintg gradually and in different areas
Ilike how it is in a realistic way with the conversation with the grandad as if your talking to him
Good door closing and shadow clip
More sounds to give edge
Try using some filters
Some shots need re-filming as their dark
Some scenes too long

Update

Got my cast filming today at 1:00pm and going to look for music to tie in my clips

Update

Doing some filming today and tommorow