Tuesday, 26 November 2013

Mrs D

There are some really good moments here. I like the structure. You need to get the rest of the filming uploaded asap and get rid of all the gaps. I like the shot of the lights flickering and the one outside at night works well. You need to consider how you will end it and add some music to create atmosphere.

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  1. Okay miss thanks for the advise will get all my footage fimed ASAP and upload another draft tommorow with music to create atmosphere

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  2. I look forward to seeing that tomorrow Callum. Don't forget. about titles too.

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